mix between the picture and the research

Change the sentence with red colour

Complete the last two chapters which

the result and discussion and the conclusion

Try to use the entire figure in the main body and the remain but it in the appendix and

try to mix between the picture and the research.

Try to read the dissertation from the first.

Write the details ofthe running such

as the type of materials and the fuel, dimensions, the location and size of fire the size of mesh, etc

The cases are depend the depth

ofthe balcony which

Number of Case The depth of balcony

Case (0) Without balcony

Case (1) 1m for all floors

Case (2) 15m for

all floors

Case (3) 2m for all floors

Case (4) 1.5 just for the first floor

Make check all the dissertation is organisation and tidy

and ready to submit.

Descript the stories and location of door.

Mention to location ofthermocouples and how many.

Try to make

table for the cases.

I will provided with my order some article try to read it before you write because it is useful.

When you

want to discuss the result try to focus on (temperature, visibility .amount of smoke which spread to the above floor
Make compare

between different floors in temperature and visibility .and on the other side the amount of smoke between many cases.
If you see the

picture of spread of smoke from the faced you will see in case of without balcony go upward
the doors balconies above which will
effect on all the floor while in case of balcony the smoke will spread in different direction as you see in picture try to mention to
this knowledge

The total word for all dissertations approximately 10ooOwords.

The details ofthe case you can take from the page

of running.

But in your account The results was useful to put it in the result s I mean when the depth ofthe balcony increase the
spread of smoke and temperature will decrease

I want to make compare between the case (0, 1,2,3) all together and on the other hand

between the case2 and case 4.

There is no experimental I have just used FDS.

If you can add some references

Each picture

and figure for each case I put it in the separate page and you can check the time from the picture

Can you name the graph

Write the recommendation and further study

Try to cover all part.

If you can to mention on the geometry ofthe

balcony

The title of dissertation will be ( Spread of smoke from a window on the exterior wall and balcony structures).