Posted: September 13th, 2017
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I have currently arranged the table of content manually, and i would like you to arrange it as it is now but please add to it the hyperlink and adjust it properly, and also add the figures beside the chapters and sub chapters into the dissertation for easy location.
I could see only one proof error which in on page three where you have used the phrase “it would have been would have been more challenging” – this needs correcting.
I recommend that for clarity you should make the chapters and headings follow the conventional 1/1.1/1.1.1 in both contents and text. There are some strange page/space gaps in the index of the version you sent to me. Also the heading styles throughout need to be consistent. At present, in addition to being not clearly numbered (as 1.1/ 1.2 etc) the sub- headings are all over the place (left/indented/centred) for example in Chapter 1. These – thankfully minor issues – are an interruption to smooth reading and navigation of the document.
The work is otherwise presentable as a doctoral dissertation for the DBA and it is my pleasure, subject to the above and any other regulatory considerations, to approve it as complete and to commend it to my colleagues in the Doctoral School for final examination.
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