Posted: July 9th, 2015

Social media

Written below is feedback on a failed project could you please edit and add what is missing from the project. – Your thesis lacks a proper introduction, any literature review, and indeed any attempt at research. -You seem to hold a number of opinions on the issue of social media influence and your project is a means of sharing them with the reader. Unfortunately, that does not constitute an academic project. -Finally, the bibliography you have appended is very inadequate, especially given the breadth of the topic, with a somewhat strange range of topics from media law to computer-mediated marketing. Please reference properly

Which then brings me to the third issue. Your project seems to be based on your views of how ‘social media shape our lives’, it is a more an extended blog, rather than a serious examination of the topic. Indeed, the literature you use is extremely limited. – Approx 250 words on Literature Review Approx 550 words required to add and for editing