Posted: April 14th, 2015

Solatek Company essay extension

this is a group essay which consists three members. the essay that u completed is just a short version, and this one is an extension and a more detailed one.
the files that i am going to upload are:
1. the instructions and structure. as i have mentioned this group essay have three members, the parts that i have highlighted in red, you DO NOT need to write about. the sections in black are the ones that you NEED to write on. cause one of my group members is going to write the RED part. since our teacher is going to mark this essay according to what we are going to write individually, (so each of us will receive a mark for our responsible part). So please add around 1650 words in the parts that are in BLACK.
2. the second file is the feedback from our teacher for the first, shorter version. please have a look that at feedback and see what can be improved and change.